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		<title>Word Imagery</title>
		<link>http://eastercarmuirs.edublogs.org/2009/06/22/word-imagery/</link>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 22 Jun 2009 11:01:32 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Mr O.</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Some Word Imagery from our Myst Writing:
The watery lagoon was like a Sherlock Holmes mystery waiting to be solved. 
The steep stone steps were as jagged as the blades of a knife.  
The creepy man was like the devil sneaking down the stone steps.  
The house was like a jungle waiting for the zoo to [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Some Word Imagery from our Myst Writing:</p>
<p><span style="color: #339966;">The watery lagoon was like a Sherlock Holmes mystery waiting to be solved. </span></p>
<p><span style="color: #339966;">The steep stone steps were as jagged as the blades of a knife.  </span></p>
<p><span style="color: #339966;">The creepy man was like the devil sneaking down the stone steps.  </span></p>
<p><span style="color: #339966;">The house was like a jungle waiting for the zoo to come alive.   </span></p>
<p><span style="color: #339966;">The dragon&#8217;s teeth were like a volcano bursting through the rocks. </span></p>
<p><span style="color: #339966;">The mini solar system was like a fire burning through my eyes. </span></p>
<p><span style="color: #339966;">The golden desert was like blocks of gold piled up in the sand. </span></p>
<p><span style="color: #339966;">The sea was as silent as a mouse creeping into the darkness of the night. </span></p>
<p><span style="color: #339966;">The lift was like a gun shooting up into the night. </span></p>
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		<title>Writing with Myst</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 22 Jun 2009 10:57:00 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Mr O.</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[The sea glimmered as the devils horns shot up through the rocks, on the rocky bay.  Giant mountains of rocks like stepping stones lay in the water.  As I walked down the slippery, steep, stone steps going further down leading to a bridge over a watery lagoon.  I could see another devils horn shooting up [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><span style="color: #ff00ff;">The sea glimmered as the devils horns shot up through the rocks, on the rocky bay.  Giant mountains of rocks like stepping stones lay in the water.  As I walked down the slippery, steep, stone steps going further down leading to a bridge over a watery lagoon.  I could see another devils horn shooting up out of the silent lagoon, into the light as I crept into the empty house as I squeezed through the stain glass door.</span></p>
<p><span style="color: #ff00ff;">Once I went in, I had a garden in the room complete with a small bridge.  Giant black cobwebs barred my way.  I made my way up and it was like I was inside a hollowed out tooth. This was never ending it just crept into the darkness. It was like a dungeon of questions.  I opened the Furness and pulled a leaver then it shot up like a gun shot just fired.  As I took a look at all the leavers and tried to figure out how to work them the dungeon of puzzles came alive.  When they opened up there were tiny planets for someone to follow.</span></p>
<p><span style="color: #ff00ff;">I found myself in the laboratory of a mad professor. Strange body parts of an animal were hung out of a giant snail shell, an experiment gone wrong. Intestines sprawled all over the desk like small ropes. Then the lift came back down and as I stepped inside it began to move upwards. I was petrified as I arrived up at the next level. As the man reappeared my heart started to race. Then he disappeared. The lift started to move and go back down. The door was locked and then it re opened and I sprang out.</span></p>
<p><span style="color: #ff00ff;">The Irv</span></p>
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		<title>P3 Safer Internet Day!</title>
		<link>http://eastercarmuirs.edublogs.org/2009/02/10/p3-safer-internet-day/</link>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 10 Feb 2009 13:42:09 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Staff</dc:creator>
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On Tuesday 10th February it was Safer Internet Day.  We decided to make 
 
posters to help people in the school keep safe on the internet.  We learned that sometimes people are not who they say they are and we must be careful when chatting online.  It is really important not to give out your address [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt; text-align: center;"><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: Papyrus;"><a href="http://eastercarmuirs.edublogs.org/files/2009/02/internet-safety-poster-001.jpg"><img class="alignnone size-medium wp-image-644 aligncenter" title="internet-safety-poster-001" src="http://eastercarmuirs.edublogs.org/files/2009/02/internet-safety-poster-001-300x165.jpg" alt="" width="300" height="165" /></a></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: Papyrus;">On Tuesday 10<sup>th</sup> February it was Safer Internet Day.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>We decided to make </span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: Papyrus;">posters to help people in the school keep safe on the internet.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>We learned tha</span><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: Papyrus;">t sometimes people are not who they say they are and we must be careful when chatting online.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>It is really important not to give out your address or your phone number.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>Look at our great posters!<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span></span></p>
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		<title>Electricity Safety</title>
		<link>http://eastercarmuirs.edublogs.org/2009/01/29/electricity-safety/</link>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 29 Jan 2009 12:30:27 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>eastcarpupil</dc:creator>
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P3 have been learning about electricity in science over the last few weeks.  We learned that it is really important to keep safe around electricity and we made a poster to tell P2 about the dangers.  We put things like don’t touch a plug with wet hands and never stick your fingers in a socket [...]]]></description>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align: center;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: Shruti;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: Shruti;"><a href="http://eastercarmuirs.edublogs.org/files/2009/01/posters-004-blog.jpg"><img class="alignnone size-medium wp-image-639 alignright" style="float: right;" title="posters-004-blog" src="http://eastercarmuirs.edublogs.org/files/2009/01/posters-004-blog-224x300.jpg" alt="" width="224" height="300" /></a></span></span><a href="http://eastercarmuirs.edublogs.org/files/2009/01/posters-004-blog.jpg"></a></span></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt 36pt;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><span style="font-size: 14pt; font-family: Shruti;">P3 have been learning about electricity in science over the last few weeks.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>We learned that it is really important to keep safe around electricity and we made a poster to tell P2 about the dangers.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>We put things like don’t touch a plug with wet hands and never stick your fingers in a socket on our posters.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>We think they learned lots from our posters which was excellent.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">  </span>By Rebecca, Jamie T, Jamie Mac and Dean.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></span></span></p>
<div><span style="font-size: 20pt;"><span style="font-family: Times New Roman;"> <a href="http://eastercarmuirs.edublogs.org/files/2009/01/posters-002blog.jpg"><img class="alignnone size-medium wp-image-638" title="posters-002blog" src="http://eastercarmuirs.edublogs.org/files/2009/01/posters-002blog-228x300.jpg" alt="" width="228" height="300" /></a> </span></span></div>
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		<title>Robert  Burns assembly</title>
		<link>http://eastercarmuirs.edublogs.org/2009/01/26/robert-burns-assembly/</link>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 26 Jan 2009 16:03:17 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>eastcarpupil</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[On Friday 30th of January there will be a Robert Burns assembley. There will be lots of things like poems,songs and people talking. It is at 9:30 there will be lots of people for other people from different classes and there will be 1song at the end and start.
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>On Friday 30th of January there will be a Robert Burns assembley. There will be lots of things like poems,songs and people talking. It is at 9:30 there will be lots of people for other people from different classes and there will be 1song at the end and start.</p>
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		<title>p2 poems</title>
		<link>http://eastercarmuirs.edublogs.org/2008/12/01/p2-poems/</link>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 01 Dec 2008 16:04:10 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>eastcarpupil</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Fireworks  go  bang,
Fireworks  go  boom,
Up in the  sky,
I  like  the  rockets.
Caitlin P2
 
  

Fireworks  go  bang,
Fireworks  go  boom,
I  like  the  rockets.
Jamie W P2

 
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0cm 14.15pt 12pt 0cm"><span style="font-size: large;font-family: SassoonPrimaryInfant">Fireworks<span>  </span>go<span>  </span>bang,</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0cm 14.15pt 12pt 0cm"><span style="font-size: large;font-family: SassoonPrimaryInfant">Fireworks<span>  </span>go<span>  </span>boom,</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0cm 14.15pt 12pt 0cm"><span style="font-size: large;font-family: SassoonPrimaryInfant">Up in the<span>  </span>sky,</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0cm 14.15pt 12pt 0cm"><span style="font-size: large;font-family: SassoonPrimaryInfant">I<span>  </span>like<span>  </span>the<span>  </span>rockets.</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0cm 14.15pt 12pt 0cm"><span style="font-size: large;font-family: SassoonPrimaryInfant">Caitlin P2</span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0cm 14.15pt 12pt 0cm">Fireworks<span>  </span>go<span>  </span>bang,</p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0cm 14.15pt 12pt 0cm">Fireworks<span>  </span>go<span>  </span>boom,</p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0cm 14.15pt 12pt 0cm">I<span>  </span>like<span>  </span>the<span>  </span>rockets.</p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0cm 14.15pt 12pt 0cm">Jamie W P2</p>
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		<title>P3 and fireworks</title>
		<link>http://eastercarmuirs.edublogs.org/2008/11/03/p3-and-fireworks/</link>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 03 Nov 2008 16:00:02 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>eastcarpupil</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[P3 have been learning about onomatopoeia in grammar this week.  We learned that onomatopoeia is a type of word that sounds like the thing it is describing.  We used our imagination and pretended we were at a fireworks display.  We had on our coats, hats and gloves.  We thought of lots of firework onomatopoeia words [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt"><span style="font-size: small"><span style="font-family:">P3 have been learning about onomatopoeia in grammar this week.<span>  </span>We learned that </span><span style="color: #000000">onomatopoeia is a type of word that sounds like the thing it is describing.<span>  </span></span><span style="font-family:">We used our imagination and pretended we were at a fireworks display.<span>  </span>We had on our coats, hats and gloves.<span>  </span>We thought of lots of firework onomatopoeia words like crash, sizzle, woosh, boom, bang and pop.</span></span></p>
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		<title>comic life in PE</title>
		<link>http://eastercarmuirs.edublogs.org/2008/09/18/comic-life-in-pe/</link>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 18 Sep 2008 08:54:23 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Mr O.</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[we have been using comic life to write instructions for our game of quick netball&#8230;
 

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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>we have been using comic life to write instructions for our game of quick netball&#8230;</p>
<p> <a href="http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3295/2867637590_c4ca9eca2c_o.jpg" target="_blank"><img src="http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3295/2867637590_7ac507024c_m.jpg" alt="comic life pe" width="170" height="240" /></a></p>
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